We had a great Writer's Workshop with Tyler Enfield last week. Mr. Enfield taught us the 2 things you need to create a story:
Structure and Creative Juices!
Mr. Enfield showed us the 5 parts that make up the structure of stories. Every story has these 5 parts:
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| Characters are why we care! (characters) |
Tyler showed us how to write a 5 sentence story using the 5 parts of stories. Here is our class 5 sentence story we wrote with him.
We were all very engaged in our writing!
Mr. Enfield also talked to us about some "anti rules" for writing to help us boost our creativity.
Once upon a time there was a beagle puppy named Alexander. He lived in a far, far away land. He wanted a big, juicy steak more than anything else in the world, but he couldn't find any juicy steaks! So he wrote his friend a letter and his friend brought him a juicy steak!
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Once upon a time there was a flower.She lived in a garden.
ReplyDeleteShe wanted the water in the water can but,it wasn't full.
so she turned on the hose and had a drink of water.
By:Bubblegum Chewer
Very cool!
DeleteOnce upon a time there was a guy named Bob. He wanted a big pinapl. But there was a moutan in the way so he called one of her friends and made a jet pak to fly over the moutian then he got his pinaple.
ReplyDeleteWhat is the friends name?
DeleteOnce upon a time there was a person named Horrible harry and he lived in a castle and he did not want to be Horrible so he turnd his name to good Harry.
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DeleteOnce there lived a Big Red Pineapple. He lived in a big red house. He wanted to be a jellybean. But he wasn't that. So he just ate one insisted!
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Don't Eva!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DeleteOnce upon a time there was a fat ninja monkey.
ReplyDeletehe jumpt of a tree and bunct up and down. He wants a big basuka!!!.but he can't.So he whet to the hospatail bought a basuka.
By: Owen Evan.
Just how fat
DeleteOnce there was a dog named Lila.
ReplyDeleteShe lived in a tower.
She want's a treat.
But,She broke her leg.
She pulled her self.
By.Hailey Ross
Once up on a time there was a old heap of junk broken down robot. He lived in a old indastreil plant.He wanted more than anything to get out of there.But the doors where locked.So he nocked them down.
ReplyDeleteOnce upon a time there lived a red jellybean. He lived in a gingerbread house.He wanted to live in a manchine. But he didn't have enough money. So he dug up some GOLD!!!!!
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One spon a time ther was a najal a baby najal he was thrn to get a baby bolor but the arne baby got it farst so i alcsz the manjer to get me one baby boly so i get my oln baby bolor
ReplyDeleteOnce upon a time there was a monster dog he lived in a ware house she wanted a boyfreind the problem was she coudn't find one so she gets a make over.
ReplyDeleteOnce upon a time there was a cute Pug! She lived in a
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One day a millionare wanted a pet so he the cute pug!!!!!!!
Once upon a time there was a dog named fuley.He lived in a tank.And he wonted to takeover Mrs F clase.But all the kids in
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Once there was a hexadon he won an alimpik marathon wen he was 3 and he defetid 6 reselers he also was the first to pas acnomey!
ReplyDeleteHe lived on a planet that is a combanashon of Neptune and Jupiter his house conected to plants vs zombes his six leged salamander layd an ege and a snapapel ate a sworm of masqetos he used air to push the masketos to the snapapel.
he is in grade 4000000.he wanted to get the cor of light but an armey of orks,trols,ogers,beasts and a devistating river so he fites them.shing bang bonk slash sssssspppppppllllaaaattt row row row.
Once upon a time there was a fat pig. He lived in a farm barn and he wanted to go free.But the fat pigs farmer was evil.so the fat pig kicked him in the tuski.
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Once upon time there was a girl named grace. She lived in a manchon. She wanted a big flower but she did not have money so she went to all you can get money store and then she got her flower.
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Once upon a time there was a little teddy bear.He lived in a barbie house.He wanted some clothes that fit him just right but,the clothes were all to big.So he bought a shrink ray and shrunk the clothes to to make them fit just right and he loved them.
ReplyDeleteonce there was a pig he levd in a has he wated gold there was a avalach he belded a papler andfluover
ReplyDeleteOnce upon a time there was a a ball. he lived in a mantion. he wanted a juice box but he was alergic. so he said i'll just pass
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Once there lived three little mice. They lived in a little hole in the ground.They wanted to live in a massive manchine. But they were were tooooooo small. So they tricked the people of the city that they were the king and queen and the little one was the baby. And they got a palace!!!
ReplyDeleteOnce up on a time there was a Alien. He lived on mars.He wanted a space ship more then any thing.But he did not have anouf money.So he built one.
ReplyDeleteOnce upon a time long long ago,there lived old woman who lived in a little old shack and, she wanted a beautiful baby girl. But she was to old. So she just adopted one insisted.
ReplyDeletethere was a boy name joe and he said" yo my name is joe"he could see in the future. 1/3
ReplyDeleteThe young dragon named Scaley was very excited about his birthday party. It was that day in the beautiful mountains where he was born. If only he could learn to fly then he and his friends could play high up in Dare Devil's cave. But he was still afraid of heights. He blew out his candles, made a big wish to be brave and up he went!
ReplyDeleteonce upon a time livd a tiny tercky .it livd in a gloreass feild.so he always wanted a bbq.only he was so far away from it.so he was brething luoder than ever he was trying so hard to get it.so he slid over and bernt him self to deth.
ReplyDeleteonce upona time there was a foot ball plaer. he livd in a nis house .he was a rich man. he whaned to go to tye play offs. but he gast started. so he will chri hared and gat to the play offs...
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DeleteWhy is it so short?
Deleteonce upon a time there was a hamster . He was in a hamster jail . He wantaed food but he was so small the jail man didn't see him. He gat the food.
ReplyDeleteOnce there was a dog. He lived in a giant dog house. He wanted food and water. But a lid was on the food and water. So, he went under the lid.
ReplyDeleteStormy crismas
ReplyDeleteit was a stormy night and it was crimaseve. And Santa
didn't think that he could go he would end up in the snow
and stay there for ever. So he didn't go.
the end
Once upon a time there was a baby snake. The baby snake was lost in the forest. It wanted some BBQ chips. But it couldn't find any BBQ chips so he went to the store and scared all the people even the cashier.And he took all of the BBQ chips.
ReplyDeleteonce upan a time tere was a famis hockey player.He lived in
ReplyDeletea manshion.he got "100" gols.
They want to win!but hrit his arm.But his tem won.